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Friday, September 9, 2016

It was all a story! Presintation

This is about my space chimp story that I wrote. I made some improvements in this week. Now I made it in a presentation on a slide. If you haven't been following I wrote a draft about it please check it out. I feel proud about it because I finished it, and it was challenging because I need to make it more interesting to read. This might take long to read, but I hope you'll enjoy it bye! 

8 comments:

  1. Wow Axle, that's a lot piece of writing. Was it hard for you to write this story?

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    1. A bit, yeah. Thank you for reading my story though.

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  2. WoW!!! Your stoy was very, very, very long. Will you have an interesting or a little bit of an interesting story?

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  3. WoW!!! Your stoy was very, very, very long. Will you have an interesting or a little bit of an interesting story?

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  4. Phenomenal work Axle, your space chimp story is interesting. I like the way you use chapter's because you have a long story, it makes your writing piece unique. I wish I could make such a long story. Do you like creating long stories ?

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    1. Yes I do. Thanks for reading my story.

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  5. Wow that's a good story and can you all so comment on my blog as will from Manaia

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