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Showing posts with label Narrative. Show all posts

Friday, September 22, 2017

The life, of the life maker.

This week we  focused on this video which is called partly cloudy, it is made by Disney. Then after watching the video we started to write about it and it became our guide. It is a story about friendship and being a best friend are a friend generally. I really hope that you'll like this story and I hope that you'll be inspired by it; have a nice day, bye!

By the way here is the video : "Partly Cloudy"

"Partly Cloudy"


It’s the time when the sky turn yellowish and the clouds turn pink, they were as pink as the pink panther but where as fluffy as a silkie. The sun gave warm aura that left a cheerful mood on the sky.
In those clouds I could see many species of birds flying around and having fun, but one stands out of them all… Storks.

They deliver babies of any sort, from animals to humans. They carry them using blankets and deliver them to people/animal who ask for one. They deliver them to adults, they put the babies through windows and  at the doorway, then knock on the door. They deliver them to adult humans, but also to adult animals, like dogs, etch.

They get these babies from clouds but not just any ordinary clouds but from magical ones called, life makers. They make them from pieces of cloud then shocks it to give it life. They form the creatures ears, head and the whole body. But before they give them to the storks to deliver, they sometimes play with them first and even give them treats to eat.

They are all happy and joyful and cheerful except for one. Gus… Gus the grey cloud. Nobody was friends with him and he was always under the others.  But he’s not that lonely he had a best friend.

His best friend was also a stork and his name is Bob. He looked a bit more different that the others because some part of his body was almost featherless. This is why… When Gus started to make baby things he didn’t make cute and harmless creatures he still made creatures but, they were a bit harmful. At first he made a red bellied piranha that took some of Bob’s feather off. Next he made a big baby barracuda,  that bit Bob’s leg with it’s teeth luckily his teeth was not that sharp. This is why Gus had no friends and also the reason that Bob looked more different than the others.

As Gus looked around he sees the other clouds making adorable creatures he went jealous. He took a piece of a cloud, he rolled it and molded it to an animal that so adorable and kawaii that the other clouds would get jealous of him. It was the time for giving it life, (zzzaaappp!).  Then it turn into… a crocodile!!! The crocodile had razor sharp teeth, sharp fingernails and big, huge grin.

He thought that you know… it won’t be that bad, so he called Bob to deliver it. While waiting for Bob, Gus petted the crocodile and played around with him but it didn’t turn out good he bit Gus’s finger  luckily Gus was a cloud so it didn’t hurt. All of a sudden Bob came Gus hugged Bob and then showed the baby croc.

“Hehehehe” Bob nervously laughed. Suddenly the baby croc pounce and grabbed into Bob’s head with his big mouth. “Whaghahah” Bob shouted so Gus grabbed the body and tail of the croc so he would let go.  Finally the baby croc let go and quickly Gus put the baby croc in the blanket and gave it to Bob to deliver.
“Heh” Bob nervously laughed again, carefully Bob grabbed the top of the wrapped blanket and he carefully flew with it.
(10 minutes later, voice by the french guy in spongebob)

Before Bob returned, Gus prepared another chunk of cloud and for Bob to deliver;again. All of sudden Bob came. (More of his feathers were falling off by the way). Gus hugged Bob and then shocked the molded cloud and gave it life this time it was a baby Big horn. The baby ramed and headbutted Bob. Next after that Gus put the baby in the blanket for Bob to deliver again.

Suddenly Bob saw another life maker and another stork having fun with a dog. Gus noticed him looking at the others and felt hurt and felt that he wasn’t good enough. But then Bob quickly turned to Gus and smiled, then he took the baby and delivered it.

There were many unlucky encounters for Bob today, like when he got spiked by the porcupine made by Gus, etch. Then after Bob again Gus presented a mold of a shark!!!
It’s the time when the sky turn yellowish and the clouds turn pink, they were as pink as the pink panther but where as fluffy as a silkie. The sun gave warm aura that left a cheerful mood on the sky.
In those clouds I could see many species of birds flying around and having fun, but one stands out of them all… Storks.

They deliver babies of any sort, from animals to humans. They carry them using blankets and deliver them to people/animal who ask for one. They deliver them to adults, they put the babies through windows and  at the doorway, then knock on the door. They deliver them to adult humans, but also to adult animals, like dogs, etch.

They get these babies from clouds but not just any ordinary clouds but from magical ones called, life makers. They make them from pieces of cloud then shocks it to give it life. They form the creatures ears, head and the whole body. But before they give them to the storks to deliver, they sometimes play with them first and even give them treats to eat.

They are all happy and joyful and cheerful except for one. Gus… Gus the grey cloud. Nobody was friends with him and he was always under the others.  But he’s not that lonely he had a best friend.

His best friend was also a stork and his name is Bob. He looked a bit more different that the others because some part of his body was almost featherless. This is why… When Gus started to make baby things he didn’t make cute and harmless creatures he still made creatures but, they were a bit harmful. At first he made a red bellied piranha that took some of Bob’s feather off. Next he made a big baby barracuda,  that bit Bob’s leg with it’s teeth luckily his teeth was not that sharp. This is why Gus had no friends and also the reason that Bob looked more different than the others.

As Gus looked around he sees the other clouds making adorable creatures he went jealous. He took a piece of a cloud, he rolled it and molded it to an animal that so adorable and kawaii that the other clouds would get jealous of him. It was the time for giving it life, (zzzaaappp!).  Then it turn into… a crocodile!!! The crocodile had razor sharp teeth, sharp fingernails and big, huge grin.

He thought that you know… it won’t be that bad, so he called Bob to deliver it. While waiting for Bob, Gus petted the crocodile and played around with him but it didn’t turn out good he bit Gus’s finger  luckily Gus was a cloud so it didn’t hurt. All of a sudden Bob came Gus hugged Bob and then showed the baby croc.

“Hehehehe” Bob nervously laughed. Suddenly the baby croc pounce and grabbed into Bob’s head with his big mouth. “Whaghahah” Bob shouted so Gus grabbed the body and tail of the croc so he would let go.  Finally the baby croc let go and quickly Gus put the baby croc in the blanket and gave it to Bob to deliver.
“Heh” Bob nervously laughed again, carefully Bob grabbed the top of the wrapped blanket and he carefully flew with it.
(10 minutes later, voice by the french guy in spongebob)

Before Bob returned, Gus prepared another chunk of cloud and for Bob to deliver;again. All of sudden Bob came. (More of his feathers were falling off by the way). Gus hugged Bob and then shocked the molded cloud and gave it life this time it was a baby Big horn. The baby ramed and headbutted Bob. Next after that Gus put the baby in the blanket for Bob to deliver again.

Suddenly Bob saw another life maker and another stork having fun with a dog. Gus noticed him looking at the others and felt hurt and felt that he wasn’t good enough. But then Bob quickly turned to Gus and smiled, then he took the baby and delivered it.

There were many unlucky encounters for Bob today, like when he got spiked by the porcupine made by Gus, etch. Then after Bob again Gus presented a mold of a shark!!! Bob quickly flew away from getting bitten from  a ocean dueler that are very treacherous.
Bob went to another cloud and seem that he was playing with them.

Gus went furious and he became wrathful, he struck lighting for second but then he sobbed; and his tears made rain. Unexpectedly Bob came back only to have a amor with him. He explain what happened and said that he only got an amor and was going back to Gus after getting an amor.

Gus hugged him and sobbed again; and they continued to be a team.

The End.

Friday, September 8, 2017

The Man On The Piano

This story is about a man that played the piano and he is trying to pass his memories to his grandson by his music and things that he passed on to him. By playing the music he remembered happy and also some sad memories throughout his life. This is the story was from a video that we watched this week, we were supposed to write a story about it, and the video was our guide line. I hoped that you'll like it!

W.A.L.T
  • I know I will be successful when …
  • Re-call what is happening in the video.
  • Use adjectives and experiment with language features.
  • Use paragraphs correctly.
  • Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.
Here is the video:

Distressing, somber, drab those are the words that describe my music. I’m playing my old, classic piano and playing the music that I had always played when I was with my wife, when she was alive.The tone was as gentle and as fragile as a butterfly. Every single notes brought back many treasured memories that are as cherished as gold and diamond. I remembered those days like they were yesterday, when we were doing a duet on the piano. But even if she isn’t here when I play this music I’ll always feel her warm aura and love on my cheek and deep in my heart. Suddenly my depressing, sorrowful, crestfallen rhythm turned into a bit more exultant of a music.

I didn’t just remembered happy memories but I also remembered forlorn moments in my life, and one of them was about the great world war. My bestfriend and I joined it as we thought that it would be a fun adventure. Although when we were there we didn’t see men smiling laughing and having a fun time, but men dying one after the other.
I was assigned to be taking care of the men who got shot. Soldiers fell fast like they were a row of dominoes.

While the world was having the war I felt a strange tinge in the air. It was hatred and anger, mix up…. that feeling was malevolence. The malevolence filled all of their mind, and it also started to fill mine.

All of the soldiers started to shoot their guns not even trying to hide or trying to take cover. (Bang!) I looked to my side and saw John lying on the floor spreading more and more blood. I tried to save him, however it was too late, but before he died he was able to speak one more time and said “Jack my friend, it’s my time- don’t worry we will me aga-”. Before he could finish sentence, he passed away.

Lastly my final memory is the memory when I was a child when my dad gave me the a wooden hobby horse and I that exact horse is the present that I gave my grandson. As I finish my music I gave my grandson my book and my music filled with memories that are filled with love. When I hit the last note, I was suddenly transferred into a place where I saw John and my wife standing in front of me.

Friday, August 18, 2017

Somalia

This is a story about robots, pirates and a captain. It was inspired by a video that we watched this week. I changed the end, and made the characters from “The Pirates of the Caribbean” franchise. I really enjoyed writing as I am reading it. I hope you'll like this story, bye!


(The characters/pirates and their weapon are from “The Pirates of the Caribbean”)
We’re sailing to the horizon at sunset in the “Black Pearl”, the sun was as beautiful as amber and gold and the sea was as shiny as sapphire. We are hunting and searching for treasure as any normal pirates would, then we saw this gigantic ship, sailing, and that ship had enormous metal boxes at the back. The ship not like any other that we’ve seen in our lives because it was made in metal too.
“Jack-” called out Mr.Gibbs. (Mr.Gibbs is me first mate)
“Perhaps ye think that we’ve went in another dimension.” he continued.
“Yes Mr.gibbs I think that too. But it’s not like the first time that we did this.” I replied.
“Captain Jack Sparrow, while we’re he should we go and steal what’s in the boxes? They’d probably contain gold.” said Marty
“I’ll think about it. Yes! Let’s steal the booty!” I shouted loudly to the crew.


We unfolded our sails and went straight to the ship.  The ship was amazing and was unbelievably huge, for a second I wanted it to be me ship. Then, just as we got on, an alarm went off. (Wee!Woo!Wee!Woo!).We ignored it and continued. We didn’t see any soldiers but we saw a captain. His suit were more abnormal than usual. Because now he is only wearing blue and white with brushes on the shoulders and also with a big hat, instead of wearing a red, blue and white suit.


Two of my crewmates tied up his hands so he can’t move them
I pointed my old but despicable gun at the man with the big hat and said “What are in those boxes or safes or whatever. Do they contain gold?”
“No, pirate, they just contain fish-” he said angrily.
“What? You liar, liar and your bums on fire-” I interrupted
“Also my name is Captain Jack Sparrow, not pirate!” after I said that, Mr. Gibbs knocked him out using a pan and the captain fell over.


We went to the containers and looked inside them. We saw, fishes.
“Oh, he didn’t lie.”  When I said that, a creature made out of tin can/metal jumped out from the basement and it said “Boo!’’.
“Whaaaa!Aaah!” we all ran out terrified. We all spread like ants running from water.More of them came and started to capture us. All of us got captured, even me.


A couple of minutes later. We heard gunshots and shouting, then out of nowhere Barbosa came and freed us. “Jack, ye owe me one. I knew that ye were here because I asked Jamaica” he said. “Oh! Her!” I said back
We my crew left in a hurry away from the metal monsters, but before I left, I shouted “You should remember this day, as this is the day that you almost caught Captain Jack-” before I completed me words, a bird pooped on my face.(Actually it was on my mouth).


The End.

Thursday, August 3, 2017

A day of "Buster the Boxer"

This is a video based story that we started this week it is called "Buster the Boxer" It is about a dog named Buster at Christmas time. We had to watch a video and then write a story about it. Anyway I hope you will enjoy my story!

This is the video: Link


Buster the Boxer


Today is the hypothermic, night before Christmas and all I could see is this girl’s bed that’s decorated like Christmas tree. She jumps and hops around, excited to see, her gift from “Santa”.

But when I look outside the house, all I could see, are white back yards full of snow. But, that is not all! Jane’s dad, (my owner’s father) is building a trampoline.

He tried his hardest to build that gigantic thing, he even got hurt trying to bend a piece of metal that’s for the base. Yet when I see the finish product I saw that it was great. However as my eyes coruscate with excitement, I saw two foxes go to the trampoline and jump with enjoyment.

I could all hear what they’re saying, but the humans can’t. Then a couple of moments later, I see this badger saying “Can I join you?”
“Of Course you can!” said one of the fox.
“Now, just jump in the net and hop around.” said the the other.

The badger hopped and jumped with triumph, then more animals to join the fun.
I could see them enjoying themselves, while I, Buster sitting down and not having a good time.

More animals came, and did something that was not lame. There were squirrels too, they join the others and jumped around. I could see them having the time of their lives. But I said to myself that tomorrow, I would also have some fun.

Today is the day that I would have fun, I quickly went to the kitchen to have a bun. I finished eating it and waited to go, outside while there are still lots of snow, (I like snow).

Just as Jane’s mother opened the door, I ran for my life to get to the small hole, (the trampoline had a net around it). I jump and hopped with joy, as people looked at me like I’m weirdo but I didn’t care of any of that because now I’m leaping with joy...

Tuesday, May 16, 2017

Beyond the Lines!

At the start of this term we started to do a short story about a video that we watched, "Beyond the Lines". It was about two kids that were trapped in the war, to see the full story, click video. After, when we finished the story we had to make it in a DLO not just a DLA. DLA means there is no sight, sound or motion, we had to put those things to make this into a DLO, so what I did was made it in Book Creator  . This was a bit of a scary/sad story because there were people dying and did not see their family anymore, but anyway I hope you'll enjoy it, bye!


Monday, May 1, 2017

The Man Of Two Dimensions Vol.1

At Term 1, we started to write a story and the genre is "Fantasy". My story is about a boy that was transferred to a world that was different from the world that he used to leave in, which is "Earth". While he was on that world he learnt a something that he had never learnt before, or have he? Here read the find out. It will have a Vol.2 but I don't know when it will be published. P.S I just forgot that I didn't upload this yet till now. Anyway have a nice time reading the story, it will take about 30-40 minutes to read all of it, so sit back, relax and enjoy or lie down relax and enjoy.


Chapter 1


It’s a nice day again, there’s no storm and the beautiful, blazing sun is up.There is cold breeze in the air, like when you are at the beach, also a nice time to visit someone.


“I’m back again!” I shouted, while I merrily wave to Mr.Gibbs. Mr.Gibbs is a bender and also a friend of mine. He sells crystals that were found in caves in here Japan, or China.


“So you're back again?” he asked. “Here I have new ones, would you want take a look?-- of course you do, here.”


Since when I was a kid I really loved crystals, and I also love to collect them.
Then I found this shop called “Mr. Gibb's Crystal Shop!”. I know, a corny name right?
But I took a look, and saw many of them that I have not seen before, so of course I ask dad to buy me all of them, and he did.
Since then, I always hanged in here almost every day to see if there are new ones, and also to talk to Mr.Gibbs.


Then, while looking at the new crystals, I had a thought in my mind. It was like somebody is trying to make me think something. My head, it was spinning, I can see, creatures near me--.


“Kid, you love crystals, right! Then, have you heard the story of “The man of two dimensions.” he whispered. It suddenly vanish, I was thankful and now...scared. I quickly shook my head side to side and I quietly said “no”. Suddenly as soon as I said that, he quickly closed the store and also closed the blinds and then dragged me to a wall. Next he wrote a mysterious symbol that I have never seen before “or have I?”. All of a sudden an entrance appeared in a blink of an eye.


Then again he dragged me, this time, down into an old stair that led to an old room…
I looked around carefully and I saw that the room he dragged me into is a library. Before I even said anything, Mr.Gibbs already  took a book. It was big, old and mysterious.


“Here, I will tell you the story.” he said, chuckling.
I wondered, why would he close the store and go to this secret place to just tell me a story, is it related to me for some reason. I opened my mouth and tried to ask him  but nothing came out.


“Here is the story--” he said, opening the book.
“Along time ago, there was this boy who was called, “The Man Of Two Dimensions”.
He was a normal boy in the first Dimension called Earth, but a hero on the other. That boy did many adventures, but he only kept it to himself. He also met many friends and many enemies, he battled many foes and even their king. But at his final battle he didn’t appear and that dimension had been destroyed, and controlled. After, when he came back, he saw all it was like a picture from hell. The people hated him and he didn’t come back……”


Chapter 2
He gave me the book after he told a quarter of the story.
I waved good bye, and bowed my head(an action for appreciation in Japan culture) but I didn’t say anything.


I got home, thinking about that story. I tried to read but I can’t take it, my body can’t move and my mind is blurry, being the way it is, I fell asleep...


There were three men standing, with an army behind them and one of them was holding two crystals. The crystals were red and blue in colour, they had powers, as I see. And then crystal killed many, many, men in a second. In that time I heard a voice that called my name, it was from behind me, I looked, but then, as I look, that voice laughed and laughed. As he laughed I looked at my body and saw…..Blood.


“Aghrr!!!” I shouted. My body is limp, it felt real, I was scared. When I saw those crystals I remembered something. “They were my grandfather’s crystals” I whispered.


Tonight is my parents anniversary. I hope dad will come today for dinner because it’s a special day. My dad is a really busy man he doesn’t even come home every day.  


At the time when I was small, I had a dad. I still have him to day, but he doesn’t come back home most of the time because of his work. However today is different, he didn’t even bother to go to their marriage anniversary with mum.


“Mum, I’m going to get dad, ok?” I tried to smile, even though I was upset and disappointed.


However, when I was in his office, he wasn’t there. I looked around and asked his employees, but all they replied with is that dad went to come home for his anniversary. I wanted to come home but someone or something is stopping me. I looked around and I saw a big glass container and a crystal was inside,the crystal was blue, bright and shining. I have never seen it before,”No, wait I have. it was in the dream.” I said, shivering.


Although I was terrified. The way it shines made me, open the container and then touch it. I felt like I can’t control my body, it was like controlling itself.


I felt a shock went through my body, it was terrifying, I closed my eyes and shaked.
My body crashed in a hard floor. Then I tried to open my eyes, but I only saw a blade, flying, it was made out of light, and it was, ready to kill me…


Chapter 3:


I felt drowsy, my head was spinning and I thought I’d puke. Next, I realize I was on the floor.
Afterwards, I heard a voice, but it wasn’t clear.
“Hey, are y---de--d? If you’re----, answer, because-- still have many---  to do”  It was a voice that was like from a boy my age, like a 16-18 year old.
I was confused I didn’t know what to do. What happen to me? Was I teleported? I had many questions. How? I guess that’s out of the question now. I need to quickly tell him that I’m not dead.
I slowly open my eyes widely and then said “H--!”


Before I even spoke a sharp thing went through my stomach, I looked at it and saw that it was a bow, but it wasn’t an ordinary one. The wound was bleeding, bad.
After, the boy who talked to me  looked around and then suddenly a sword appeared in his hands. He waved it around, then all of a sudden we were teleported.


The boy carried me and laid me on a soft surface. Well I think it’s was a bed.
“My name is Jake,” I said while looking at him. My wound still hurts though, so I didn’t introduce myself very well.


As I quess he was like my age. He also had a scar in his eye, it’s a big one.
“I didn’t ask your name,” he interrupted.
“I will just get a bandage and also some other things to heal you. Anyway where are you from, Skyland?” he continued
Skyland? Where is that? But now I know this is not my world, am I hallucinating?
Maybe so, I raise my hand and pinched myself really hard. I wasn’t hallucinating, it was real.
After he came back he saw me pinching myself and muttered “Are you an idiot?”


The wound was still bleeding, and it seriously hurt.


But then, before he even tried to heal my wound. It was already healed, there were no more blood and also the arrow seem to disappear. I was confused, shocked, surprised, and so was he.


“Hey, who are you? Are you a mage? If so, why didn’t you tell me?,” he ask.
“No, I’m not a mage... ” I replied


Suddenly, something fell out of my pocket. I looked at it closely and now I know, this was my grandfather’s crystal. I touched it, and then….


“Any way, Jake or whatever your name is, I sincerely apologize for my actions. If you don’t remember, I pushed you out of the way, and then smacked you into the floor…….”he stopped.


He rushed to me, angry and also…. Happy? He grabbed my shirt and shouted “Where have you been!”


“What?! Do you know me? How?” I said, grabbing his hands.


“Of course I do! You’re my best friend, and you were the one who help me 12 years ago! Don’t you remember me, I’m Kei!” as he hugged me tightly. As I felt the warm drops of tears on my shoulder.


Chapter 4:


After that incident, when I woke he told me the whole story.


“Your grandfather was “The Man of Two Dimensions” he always helped us when we were in danger---”
Before he said anything else I shouted “wait,wait,wait,wait,wait. What?”


“Oh, didn’t your grandfather tell you that?” he replied


“Huuuuuuuh!? What do you mean he is? Are you confusing me with someone?” I said while in shock.


“Nope, I would never confused you with someone. I know who you are when I saw that scar on the side of your belly.”said Kei


“How did you know about my scar, and how did you see it?” I said


“Ahhh. I didn’t tell you yet I have an x ray vision”


When he said that I felt limp, I lost my strength and trembled.


“So you can see my private thing too”


“No, or can’t I?” he said, laughing.


“ Please don’t use your x ray vision on me, please” while again, trembling


“Ok, or will I?” Kei replied back, while again laughing


“Any way, I will continue the story. As I said you grandfather was “The Man of Two Dimensions”, as I said again he helped us when we were in danger. Then there  was this time when you were 4 years old I think, and you grandfather said that you begged him to take you here. After that, you always joined him when he came to visit. But one day you and grandfather slept in here and then one the crystals was stolen. Next a monster appeared itself with the stone, and there began the war. Your grandfather fought again and again,But he didn’t defeat it. He lost.” he finished.


“I will tell you all the story later, but for now let’s have some fun!”


Then he dragged me out and then gave me a bow. We hunted creatures that were very wierd, and as he said, “had fun” ,again we were attacked…


Chapter 5:


We were trapped, there were tons of them, they were all monsters. They looked liked shadows and also very terrifying. I felt petrified, but when I looked at Kei, I saw that he was still smiling.


“Don’t worry I can take them all down, but when something goes wrong, run, ok?.” he said confidently. I nodded. At a second he was gone, he was fighting the enemies but then…


(Swooosh!)He was caught on a net! After that he shouted”Jake! Run!”. Kei was getting beaten up, then suddenly (boom!), a monster like human appeared. He was not like the others he was bigger and had a face that looked like a lion.


He was ready to kill him, and then he bit Kei’s arm off. I felt anger coming all through me, suddenly my mind blurred. I heard a man saying, “You can save him, you are the next man”.
Next thing I noticed, I had a cane, I was saying words that I can’t even understand, but one thing I really feel that my body is being controlled.


After all the monsters we’re cleared and also when my mind was back. I came to Kei and asked “Are you ok?“


“Yeah, but Jake, that was really cool! After all you're the grandson of the hero” Kei said, on the ground, again smiling.


“Can you get the potion out of my right pocket?, it will heal me”
I reached out to his pocket and tried to look for it. I grabbed a thing and then----
“Oh no, no, no, no, that’s not it. That’s umm.. Stick… that um… I found…”(Raised up),
he said quickly and nervously.


I realized that it was really another thing, you know… Once I realized I felt a little bit embarrassed, of course, and then took of my hand really quick.


“Why would you put your stick that you found, in that side!” I said madly, looking down.
“Hehehehe, well it’s more comfortable in that side, also don’t be shy. If the potion is not there look for it on the the other side.


I had a dream again. I became powerful, I was also saving the world and mostly my “Nakamas”...


Chapter 6


Next morning when I saw Kei he was back in his tip top form, his arm was back too.
“Good morning!” Kei said, while stretching.
“Want some coffee?”


“Yes please! But are you really ok now?” I asked, sitting down on the dining chair.


“Yup! Very ok!” while passing the coffee to me. “Oh I forgot! I have to tell you the story.” he continued.


“Here let’s start. Do you remember when I said that you got banned from here.”
“Yes I do.” I replied.
“In that time when you knew that, you apparently attacked them. When that happened what they did was, cut you in half.”


Huh? Did he just say that I was cut in half?
Finally I asked “Wait wasn’t the scar because of a surgery?”


“What’s a surgery?” he said


I guess that they don’t do surgery in here.
“No it’s nothing”
“Oh, ok. Anyway, this is the thing that I want you to accept. When your grandpa passed away he transferred the power he has left, to you. Now this is your time, you are the next man. What we have to do now is find a way to get the second crystal back and kill the one who took it, and who conquered this world years ago


“Excuse me Kei why is this house not in their control yet?” I wondered
“Because it is not visible in the naked eye, but if you're wondering why you can see it is because I have let you see it. Oh and also they can’t see us when we’re inside.”
Chapter 7:


We, Kei and I, trained for at least a month and waited for the right moment.
Our plan was to save a village that was near us and then plan another way to defeat the king.


“Now’s the time” I said to Kei, hiding.


We Kei informed the people that we were going to attack and when they hear a shout they have to run to the far side of the village to safety.


“Run!!!” I shouted. After that second we were attacked.
We countered an attack and then battled enemy after enemy.
We all won the battles, but then there is this one…


“Hahhahahahah! Don’t be happy if you had just defeated those weaklings, be happy if you ever defeat me!” the last monster said with a deep voice.


He had a gigantic axe and is like a minotaur, but bigger. I guess anything could happen in here but I still have to fight, to help the people and grant my grandpa’s last wish.


“You can do it grandson.” Says a an old man, it was my grandfather! “Just go and save those people for me. Just read some of the spells in the book that I’m giving you”


Then again I transformed, I had a cane and also a book. But this time I am not controlled.
“Lingchi!” I shouted.
After I shouted that he, the monster got cuts all around him.
“Aghgrrhg” he cried.


“Final blow, Nemurenai akuma!”


Then he was….Dragged down to hell.


After all of that, the villagers were happy but this will not last, this is just the beginning.