My Mid Year Evaluation Goals.

This is my learning goals form last term, and I'am gonna have my learning conference tomorrow. I hope you'll like it

Subtracting problems close to 100

W.A.L.T  solving problems close to 100. 

Here is my video about solving subtraction that is close or over a hundred. I learned this strategy from a video and now we need to make a video about it to help you guys .  This strategy can work in hundred or up. thank you very much for coming in my blog I hope you enjoy!!!

Tions and Sions

This are my tions and sions that I have been working on and if you can solve the word find thank you. This is about learning tion and sion. Tions rules are the the word have at the end and sion are the words that have s  at the end.

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This is my presentation about the two draft that I have posted these couple of weeks. Enjoy!!

W.A.L.T make improvements to my writing and present it to an audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when I…

• Reread my work and listen to it using RW
• Check for correct punctuation
• Check spelling (red lines)
• Check recount SC to make sure I have included everything.
• Read the feedback from my peers and make improvements.

This is my second draft about The Most Horrible Migration Day and I hope you will like it.

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?#

Second Draft

The reds are my changes

The Most Horrible Migration Day

On that one day I had a super horrible migration day that I have experience in my life and this is the story.That day was a great day, sunny but windy in the Savannah’s most popular river. It wasn't  really hot but it was warm , the sun was bright, the wind was perfect and that day was May 6, my birthday. The most perfect day for me and the perfect day for us buffalo to migrate.  It was just  my dad, my mum, my grandmas, my granddads, my cousins, my aunts, my uncles and I.  We were going to the grassland because there was no more grass in that place. But they call it migration. I always hid in my dad and my mum’s shadow because I'm just a calf. I didn't knew what to do, I only knew to  follow my dad and my mum. If there is something that I'm super afraid of, it is what I met in that horrible migration day. I'm lucky I survived.

I had sense that there were creatures hiding at the back of those old and dry bushes, I could taste the fear in the air and I could hear the breath of something that was terrifying. I told my dad about it but he did not listen to me and then he said I was  just daydreaming, so I just ignored it.

My dad stopped in silence and said he heard something. Immediately we ran, we saw lions coming after us. Suddenly they chose to chase then eat me! My heart was beating as if it was getting smash by a mallet while my feet were burning like they were in  very hot, reddish-orange  lava on a volcano.  I was out of balance, all of a sudden I fell in the water, they have got me. I felt the pressure, weight, their sharp and big teeth on my neck and body.

I was seeing something in the muddy brown deep river.  Straightaway something appeared, it was a crocodile! He grabbed me in my back, I felt his small but razor sharp teeth. I felt pain on my both sides of my body.

And like I'm in a tug of war but I'm the flag at the middle. When the lions had enough they told the smallest lion to strike at the crocodile, he struck at him. While the four lions pulled me out of the water, so the crocodile could not get me for his lunch.

I thought it was my last day on Earth, but then I smelt something that was familiar for me. Finally I saw my family, they came back for me, I was crying with joy.  They thought of a way to save me, immediately my dad charged at the lions. Instantly they all charged at the lions and chased them around the path into the bushes. They freed me from the furious lions. I was happy while sobbing, my dad put me in the middle part of the thick herd and told me to stay in there.

Thank god I was saved by my family, I never knew what to do without them. I hit two birds with a one stone  by accomplishing or managing to escape from those two predators that was my most biggest fears.  The furious lions and the giant crocodile. I  felt gladly happy and thankful to god and to my family that they saved me from the predators that were terrifying for me, even now. I wish that I will never in my life have an horrifying experience, like that again.

Today's W.A.L.T is to solve 73 - 19 =. I hope you will learn something. Enjoy!!!!!

W.A.L.T solve 73 - 19 =

Subtraction in  the easy way. This video will teach you to solve subtraction in easy way. Enjoy. 

The Most Horrible Migration Day (First Draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First Draft

The Most Horrible Migration Day

That day was a great day, sunny but windy in the Savannah’s most popular river. It wasn't  really hot but it was warm, the sun was bright, the wind was perfect and that day was May 6 my birthday. The most perfect day for me and the perfect day for us buffalo to migrate. It was just me, dad, mum, my grandmas, my granddads, my cousins, my aunts and my uncles. We were going on the grassland because there was no more grass in there. But they call it migration. I always hid in my dad and my mum’s shadow because I'm just a calf I didn't know what to do, I only know to  follow my dad and my mum. If there is something that I'm super afraid of, it is what I met this migration day. I'm lucky I survived.

I knew there was something hiding in those dry bushes, I could taste the fear in the air and I could hear the breath of something that was terrifying. I told my dad about it but he did not listen to me and then he said I was  just daydreaming, so I just ignored it.

My dad stopped in silence and heard something. Immediately we ran, we saw lions coming after us. Suddenly they chose to chase then eat me! My heart was beating as if it was getting smash by a mallet while my feet were burning like they were in lava on a volcano. I was out of balance, all of a sudden I fell in the water, they have got me. I felt the pressure, weight, their sharp and big teeth on my neck and body.

I saw something in the muddy brown deep river. A crocodile! He grabbed me in my back, I felt his small but razor sharp teeth. I felt pain on my both sides of my body. Then the lions pulled me out of the water so the crocodile could not get me for his lunch.

I thought it was my last day on my dear Earth, but then I smelled something that was familiar for me. Finally I saw my family, they came back for me, I was crying with joy.  They thought of a way to save me, immediately my mum attacked. Instantly they all attacked at the lions and chased them around the place. They freed me from the furious lions. I was happy while crying, I stayed in the middle part of the herd so I would be safe.

Thank god I was saved by my family, I never knew what to do without them. I hit two birds with a one stone  by accomplishing or managing to escape from those two predators that was my most biggest fears. I felt joyfully happy and thankful to god and to my family that they saved me from the predators that were terrifying for me. I wish that will never ever have an experience like that again.

W.A.L.T recall  events in order.

	A herd of  buffalo are walking by the river to go in the grassland.
	A pride of lions are watching the buffalo while they are in the sun.
	The lion getting ready  pounce  on the buffalo.
	Suddenly the lions chase the herd of buffalo.
	The lions are separating the big buffalo and the baby calf.
	The lions ambushed the calf and attacked him and they drove in the water then a crocodile attack and tried to steal the calf.
	The herd of buffalo came back and gather to get the calf from the hungry lions.
	The buffalo attack with there big pointy horns.
	The buffalo chase the lion and get the baby calf.