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Friday, June 10, 2016

This is my presentation about the two draft that I have posted these couple of weeks. Enjoy!!


W.A.L.T make improvements to my writing and present it to an audience.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when I…

  • Reread my work and listen to it using RW
  • Check for correct punctuation
  • Check spelling (red lines)
  • Check recount SC to make sure I have included everything.
  • Read the feedback from my peers and make improvements.

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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 10, 2016 at 11:15 AM

    Wow done i like your work from Manai

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  2. UnknownJune 19, 2016 at 5:30 PM

    I love your work son keep it up 😘

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  3. UnknownJune 19, 2016 at 5:47 PM

    awesome nice work

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  4. UnknownJune 19, 2016 at 5:47 PM

    awesone

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  5. UnknownJune 21, 2016 at 11:44 AM

    nice presentation..

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  6. UnknownJune 21, 2016 at 11:44 AM

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  8. AnonymousJune 29, 2016 at 12:24 PM

    Wow Axle that was perfect. I like how you described the story. the story was like a movie with all words that you wright.

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  9. AnonymousJuly 1, 2016 at 9:24 AM

    Thank you so much!!!!

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