This is about my space chimp story that I wrote. I made some improvements in this week. Now I made it in a presentation on a slide. If you haven't been following I wrote a draft about it please check it out. I feel proud about it because I finished it, and it was challenging because I need to make it more interesting to read. This might take long to read, but I hope you'll enjoy it bye!
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, September 9, 2016
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Wow Axle, that's a lot piece of writing. Was it hard for you to write this story?
ReplyDeleteA bit, yeah. Thank you for reading my story though.
DeleteWoW!!! Your stoy was very, very, very long. Will you have an interesting or a little bit of an interesting story?
ReplyDeleteMaybe. But thanks for reading.
DeleteWoW!!! Your stoy was very, very, very long. Will you have an interesting or a little bit of an interesting story?
ReplyDeletePhenomenal work Axle, your space chimp story is interesting. I like the way you use chapter's because you have a long story, it makes your writing piece unique. I wish I could make such a long story. Do you like creating long stories ?
ReplyDeleteYes I do. Thanks for reading my story.
DeleteWow that's a good story and can you all so comment on my blog as will from Manaia
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