I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, May 16, 2017
Beyond the Lines!
At the start of this term we started to do a short story about a video that we watched, "Beyond the Lines". It was about two kids that were trapped in the war, to see the full story, click video. After, when we finished the story we had to make it in a DLO not just a DLA. DLA means there is no sight, sound or motion, we had to put those things to make this into a DLO, so what I did was made it in Book Creator . This was a bit of a scary/sad story because there were people dying and did not see their family anymore, but anyway I hope you'll enjoy it, bye!
Labels:
DLO,
final draft,
Narrative,
Story,
Term 2 2017,
writing,
ww1
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