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Friday, July 29, 2016

Space Chimp!!

Here is my video and some photos about a Chimpanzee that was sent into space. We have watched a  video and we have to plan to make a story about it. I hope you will like it bye!!!!
W.A.L.T write a narrative

Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
  • The title is suitable for the text.
  • The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
  • The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
  • The resolution explains how the problem was solved.





2 comments:

  1. Outstanding Axle! You have created a really detailed plan for your narrative. I really like the detail of your problem. I can't wait to read your story. How will this help you , when writing your story?

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  2. Thank you Mr.Scott for your feed back. I think this would help me to describe whats happening and where is the place. But thank you for your feed back!

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