Today I have made my comparison about the Diwali, the Christmas and the things that are the same about them. I really enjoyed making this and I really hope you will enjoy looking at this too. Coming up next would be my presentation about it so stay tuned bye!
Hi Axle, I really liked your comparison about Diwali. I saw some one mistake like, in the comparison of both you wrote celebrates three times . I hope you like my comment/feedback of the comparison. Bye!!
ReplyDeleteHi Axle, as well I saw 2 and's in one sentence. Hope you like my two comments/feedback's! Bye!!
DeleteKhush thanks for you feed back. But in the comparison you said I wrote celebration 3x and yes you are right but it is not a mistake. The cause of that is I them in each sentences first it is a celebration of gifts, they are both celebration and they are special celebrations. Anyway thanks bye!
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