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Monday, November 6, 2017

Digging holes for Term 4?

In Term 3 we've started to look at novels for reading. In that term I choose to read the Among The Hidden; this term we've been doing same novels studies but with another book this time the title of the book is "Holes by Louis Sachar". It's about a boy that was accused of something that he didn't do and went to Camp Green Lake. Then we started to work on the character traits, it is where I take a look of some of the characters at the first chapters and write them down and some information about them. It 's still a work in progress but here are some of them that are almost finished. I want to know what do you think needs an improvement; for example if you think that I need more information or description. If you have something that you think needs an improvement please comment down below. Any way have a nice day, bye!


2 comments:

  1. Hey Axle, I like how you presented your post. I like the way that you described Stanley as a innocent boy. For my feedback to you I'd say that you should stay on the same track and continue what you are doing. Why do you think Stanley got into prison?

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  2. Thank for commenting Lasa, in the story they thought that Stanley stole a pair of sneakers from an orphanage, but in reality they threw them at him. Any way, again thank you for commenting, bye!

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