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Tuesday, February 20, 2018

Sailing to the "Seven seas" (with Captain Jack sparrow/Click bait)

Hello! It's me Axle and now I'm in high school, yay! Last week the whole yr.7s went sailing, (like we did last year, in the same place). We rode a bus to get there but it was too far away, (I think, because I didn't really pay attention, because I was talking with my friends).

 But anyway when we got there we we're put in groups, groups 1, 2 & 3, (I was in group 3). After that, we had to form another group that only consist of 3 people. Then after we have form a group the instructors taught us things about sailing and blah bab blah/etch. Anyway after all that happened, we went sailing! But it wasn't that fun at first, because there was almost no wind; the boat we're almost not moving. Suddenly when we had to eat the wind got stronger, and then we went sailing again and it was amazing. While that was happening people went going on and on about swimming.

Long story, short we went swimming, then sailing and then we went home. I loved it especially when the wind got stronger, and I also loved it when we went swimming. But anyway, I hope that you liked this post and then again have a nice day, bye!






5 comments:

  1. Kumusta Axle! I like your blog spot about sailing. Specially the picture you added. You have a mistake, when you said
    "then after we have form a group the instructors taught us..." before the word "then" you put a full stop to it, I'm just reminding you that you forgot to change the word "then" to "Then". Anyway keep up the supercalifragilisticexpialidocious work.

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    1. Thank you for your comment, I've fix the problem. Thank you very much!

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  2. Hey Axle,
    Your title did exactly what you wanted it to! I clicked!!!
    Great recount of the events that happened on that day, I wish I got the chance to sail at school! I am wondering if you could break your ideas into paragraphs to make it more clear to understand the timing.
    Keep up the great work!

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    1. Hello Ms.Morgan,
      thank you for the comment, I've put them into paragraphs now; anyway thank you for your advice/comment.

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  3. Hello Axle.
    I really like your work because when I first read the first sentence It's was so make sense to me. Keep up the good work Axle Good job.

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