As said before we are currently getting ready for Market Day. Here is another advertisement that we made. The video is about how yummy and delicious our product is and why you should buy it. Unfortunately, there was a malfunction in technology in which we couldn't put a voice over in it. That is why we decided to just put the text that we were supposed to say in the powtoon video, which was a bit of an inconvenience, but all in all, I think we have made a quality powtoon video, here it is, enjoy!
Here is the link:
https://www.powtoon.com/online-presentation/eSjC9BsFUPR/?mode=movie#/
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, September 17, 2018
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Wow, Axle! You are a very dedicated student. I can tell because you got your blog work posted so quickly. Well done! You are really showing our value of commitment.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how entertaining your advertisement was and how you and your group took on this bonus challenge today. You all worked well together and contributed to the project. I was very impressed.
My favourite part was the end where you featured a picture of our school principal! Do you think you would like to share this video with him? I bet he would love to see the hard work you have been putting in!
Keep up the great work!
- Miss Birtch
Thank you for commenting on my blog Miss Birch, absolutely I would love for the principal to see this. Thank you for the feedback!
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ReplyDeleteThat is awesome .. 'ka mau te wehi'. And .. who was that handsome man at the end? Does he get an appearance fee?
I wonder if you could create even more impact by changing your choice of music? Good luck on Market Day. I don't normally eat refined sugar these days, but you may just tempt me...
Hello Mr.Sutton,
DeleteThank you very much for commenting on my blog! Just to say, you know very well who that man is at the end, don't you?:) Also,"he who shall not be named"(You), doesn't need an appearance fee, it is totally free! I do think the music could've been better, it was just that we got short on time and that we couldn't really look for a better music. But surely next time that I make a powtoon or any other DLO, I will make sure that I will manage my time better. Again, thank you for taking your time to comment on my blog; and be sure to drop on by on our stall and try our heavenly Croquembouche, it will not disappoint!